Natalie, Love the use of a story in your elevator pitch... it really helps me understand the issues of the RTS app. Your use of body language and hand movements kept me engaged. I was able to clearly understand what you were trying to convey and I remembered your points after the video was over. Awesome!
Natalie- I enjoyed your elevator pitch, although there were times where you spoke a little too fast and I struggled to understand what you said. Aside from that, I believe you were concise with the information you provided and it was easily transmitted. I also liked your use of facial expressions and body language. After watching my elevator pitch, I felt like I was watching a monotone zombie. I look forward to see how your pitch evolves overtime. Great job!
Hi, Natalie! Your elevator pitch was very impressive. I LOVE that you used a statistic to prove your point. That really legitimized your proposal. I also loved when you painted a relatable picture in the beginning. I'm sure that resonated with everyone who saw it. Your hand gestures and body language keeps the audience engaged. Your excitement for the topic definitely got me excited, too! Great job!
Natalie,
ReplyDeleteLove the use of a story in your elevator pitch... it really helps me understand the issues of the RTS app. Your use of body language and hand movements kept me engaged. I was able to clearly understand what you were trying to convey and I remembered your points after the video was over. Awesome!
Natalie-
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your elevator pitch, although there were times where you spoke a little too fast and I struggled to understand what you said. Aside from that, I believe you were concise with the information you provided and it was easily transmitted. I also liked your use of facial expressions and body language. After watching my elevator pitch, I felt like I was watching a monotone zombie. I look forward to see how your pitch evolves overtime. Great job!
Hi, Natalie! Your elevator pitch was very impressive. I LOVE that you used a statistic to prove your point. That really legitimized your proposal. I also loved when you painted a relatable picture in the beginning. I'm sure that resonated with everyone who saw it. Your hand gestures and body language keeps the audience engaged. Your excitement for the topic definitely got me excited, too! Great job!
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